Studying is something that everyone does or should have done at some point in their life. Depending on the person and their lifestyle depends on the method of studying they will be doing. There are three different studying methods, one for the high achievers, one for the ones that just want to pass and one for the lazy or don't care.
You've laid out the topic and the direction you will go, but you haven't really written a graf that holds the reader, that has a hook, that has anything of you in it--and that's what an essay will need: your experiences and observations, so try an intro that puts Courtney right in it.
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